intermediate stages page 10 of my manga

I tried to keep the site simple here to let the reader get 

a relation to Juni and her feelings. The storyboard is just 

a rough distribution of what is central to the viewer.

I keep an eye of it but do some changes as well in the 

further stages. ^^ When i do the the tracing i use an

blue mechanical pencil. it won't show up after scanning ;)

while inking i concentrated to give Juni's eyes a good 

contrast and to avoid putting too much details into the back-

ground. The page should be easy to read and also look clean!

With the screentone i finally create more atmosphere

and set some strong contrasts to lead the reader through the

panels ;)

Hope you like page 10 

You can read my manga in english here 

Sometimes she's the light